First I must say that Twine is a damn nice story platform.
Starting to put a story together, got the first few passages online and looking for some feedback before I write to much more.
The story is Whence Wildark and can be found at
http://mykael.neocities.org/WhenceWildark.html.
The story contains mild adult content and horror.
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I'll have to plead poetic license on the title until I can come up with a better one - which I'll probably have to write some more of the story to do...