Hello I am looking for feedback or thoughts on this Twine mini-story I finished a few weeks ago;
Glitch is an interactive multimedia story game built in Twine exploring ideas of conciousness, memory, technology and the human soul.
You just want to know who you are, and how you got here….
Trailer Here - https://youtu.be/8vIVEyUzGlQ
Playable link on my website here
I also did a blog documenting the process of creating Glitch
if that's of interest too.
Glitch is my first 'proper' twine story, I'm happy with the aesthetic style and most elements of the story itself.
It is what I would describe as a 'bit of a puzzle box mystery game' in that my intention was to send the player around in loops and get them to do a bit of lateral thinking, the story is structured so as to be enigmatic and mysterious.
It's only meant as a short game, but I'd be really interested in hearing different people's thoughts on it.
It has some interesting additional technical elements such as use of Video and WebGL, and I'd also be interested in getting feedback on how successful people think these are implemented and any bugs they encounter too (I've only really encountered issues on IE so far)
Finally I have a link here to glitch on ifdb
if you feel like reviewing it.