Haha! That was great! Funny and fun. Pictures were awesome.
One bit of constructive feedback: Maybe put your choices on separate lines, or otherwise separate the sentences in some way. It was a little hard to recognize that there were two options until I hovered on them. Hope that helps! Keep up the good work!
Great first effort: that was entertaining . I also love the pictures, and the tone of the writing.
My suggestion would be to maybe make the pictures a consistent size, and perhaps do a bit of css styling to convey the mood a bit more through the typography... maybe a bloody font and red color for links, or some such.
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One bit of constructive feedback: Maybe put your choices on separate lines, or otherwise separate the sentences in some way. It was a little hard to recognize that there were two options until I hovered on them. Hope that helps! Keep up the good work!
My suggestion would be to maybe make the pictures a consistent size, and perhaps do a bit of css styling to convey the mood a bit more through the typography... maybe a bloody font and red color for links, or some such.