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Graduated Accrual Sequence Poem New Edit. Nope, I'm not going away.

ColorfulWarColorfulWar
in Workshop
Apparently. So, here's a new version of the last poem that employs negative space because I don't know. Works better for me, though. Feed me back.

Protecting Sugarcane

Protecting Responsive

Comments

  • SageSage
    Loved it. I thought it was much improved this time and the negative space helped because I needed to be more aware of what was happening rather than mindlessly click. Responsive>Sugarcane (white v black).

    Great work. Thank you for the added effort.
  • ColorfulWarColorfulWar
    Thanks for reading, Sage! I put the responsive version in because you made me realize that not everyone has my white text on a black background fetish, and because I can't quite figure out what's up with Sugarcube on my end. It keeps doing a weird jumpy thing with the text, putting it further down the page for a while before it jumps back up to the top. With this piece, especially, I knew it would detract. I'll come back to the formatting once a I catch up on my HTML and CSS. Thanks again!
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