Hello people of Twine. Call me ChocoChoco (and a novice)!
I want to show you my first game I made. First!
So don't get mad at me for being so bad.
FIRST OF ALL, I put in a lot of code and if commands, either commands, etc. and there may be some errors. I probably didn't look too carefully. If that so happens, please tell me right here in the comments. I'll check the problem and make sure everything is all right.
SECOND OF ALL, oh come on, take it easy on me. I'm still young (really young) and learning! Give me some constructive feedback, of course. Not destructive. But I know everyone here is nice and not just someone that says, "you stoopid" or something like that. So I guess I won't have to worry about that.. hope I'm not jinxing anything..
THIRD OF ALL, enjoy. This is a pirate-RPG, inspired by one of my favorite writers, peter123 (in textadventures), and, though someone beat me to the genre, I still want to show it. Give me your honest opinions, and I'll try to work on that.
And if the issue is the graphics or design.. WELL..
Oh, yes, I named the game Land, Ho!
THE GAME IS UNDER DEVELOPMENT! NOT YET COMPLETED! But WILL BE!