Apologies if this is not the right place to post this, but check out my first public Twine. (:
It's very much a POC. I wanted to make a (very) short story with two characters where the player could switch between the two at any time. There are a couple of simple puzzles that require you to do certain things with both characters. Now that I know it's doable, I'd like to develop a larger story with more moving bits.
Any feedback would be super welcome. I know the story could definitely do with a couple more passages to better signal certain events.