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Dark Deeds

sarge370sarge370
in Workshop
This is my first twine game and I wanted to see what everyone thinks about it, it's a mystery set around the end of the middle ages.

http://www.philome.la/sarge370/dark-deeds

Comments

  • RafeRafe
    It is pretty good, if linear. There are some spelling mistakes and inaccurancies, like "suspects" being spelled wrong, and the mention of "noise complaints". I doubt there were laws about noise in all medieval societies.
  • The_VoleThe_Vole
    Re: noise complaints, author might want to look at the ancient common law tort of "private nuisance."

    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nuisance