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Dark Deeds
sarge370
May 2015
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This is my first twine game and I wanted to see what everyone thinks about it, it's a mystery set around the end of the middle ages.
http://www.philome.la/sarge370/dark-deeds
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Rafe
June 2015
It is pretty good, if linear. There are some spelling mistakes and inaccurancies, like "suspects" being spelled wrong, and the mention of "noise complaints". I doubt there were laws about noise in all medieval societies.
The_Vole
June 2015
Re: noise complaints, author might want to look at the ancient common law tort of "private nuisance."
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nuisance
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