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interactive twine comic

hello dear twines! i wrote an online comic with twine1. have a look, critique is very welcome.

(only in german language)


  • I like presentation and style. Everything is fluent and working fine!

    Can I have one or two technical remarks?
    Are you going to link to story from parent webpage? If not, is it possible to change animated stripe at the start to something more meaningful? Or maybe there should be welcome page (before story starts to load) explaining what visitor is going to experience, how long it takes and so on? Staring for a while at a blank page is not something average internet user likes.
  • You are right. I had a little gif in the beginning what did work sometimes and sometimes not. So i got upset to work with this giant html and took it finally out. i will change that, thanks for your comment.
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