so, this is my story, it's called Aftermath. It's about a group of people in a post-apocalyptic scene and setting. Their mission is to get food and water for their bunker.
NOTE: THIS IS NOT A FINISHED PROJECT, IT IS STILL IN PROGRESS, I JUST WANTED TO SEE HOW IT IS NOW
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The choices you give a reader/player should be choices where they have some clue about the consequence of the choice BEFORE they make it.
Go left or right, to me... doesn't offer anything.
But...
go right and there is a gang war going on... maybe they won't notice you.
Or
go left and there is a shady guy with an axe in his hand.... but it is JUST THE ONE GUY
Well... now I have something to think about, and I know that either way, I will have some consequences to face.