Hey Twineos! I'm working toward making a series of Twine comics, and I used a good friend's birthday as an excuse to make a one-off prototype and work a bunch of stuff out. I feel especially indebted to this forum because I got some pretty cool help from TheMadExile on functionality, so I thought I might as well share the finished thing over here.
http://philome.la/derektb/kellans-big-dayCritique is always appreciated. I can't think of any specific feedback I'm looking for right now (so anything at all is a bonus). I had a few polish things I was thinking of implementing but didn't get around toKellan's birthday was over a week ago, and these wishes are already belated enough.
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You might consider making the last panel link back to the start.
Other than that, it was really cool. My favorite was da abandoned mine shaft.
Here's hoping you keep making Twine comics!
I'm doing something similar in Twine too, so great to see you doing this!
@queeniechan I'd be interested to see what that Something Similar is!